Our mission is to provide the youth of Arkansas an oppurtunity to become more aware of the dangers of working and living on farms. Farm safety education is important to the health and wellness of the youth of Arkansas. Without proper education and training, lives are in danger of being lost.
The problem that many readers may have with this statement is that it's somewhat vague. Additionally, it's difficult to grasp the true urgency of this situation just by reading this statement. Quite frankly, it may be hard for the reader to take it seriously. Many people think of farm safety as a simple plan of keeping kids safe around the house out in the country. That's simply not the case. It's a serious issue and thousands of lives are lost.
Hopefully, I can be more specific and grab the audience's attention a little more with a revised statement.
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